Photographer's Note
Passerelle Simon de Beauvoir, un autre essai. A manque de pied l apparail etait pose sur la balustrade.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Passerelle_Simone-de-Beauvoir
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SnapRJW
(31631) 2012-01-10 1:07
Hello Ioana - In the spirit of constructive criticism and in the belief most of us wish to improve our photographic skills, I would like to make a couple of comments on your shot. Your POV and composition is really good, I like the reflection in the bridge balustrade; a great idea. You have commented yourself on the lack of a tripod and this is where the shot falls short. Your 5 sec exposure really needs a stable camera, the contrast between the moving people and sharp static subjects would have been super. I also note that you used a very narrow DOF. The has resulted in a lack of focus in the FG where so much of the reflection is happening. I hope you don't mind me pointing out the flaws in the shot. I feel that it has so much potential and is very creative it is worth looking at how it could be improved. With friendship Rosemary
Photo Information
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Copyright: Ioana Vlad (sowhat)
(1004)
- Genre: ÌÅÑÒÀ
- Medium: ÖÂÅÒÍÎÉ
- Date Taken: 2008-07-11
- Categories: ÅÆÅÄÍÅÂÍÎÅ, ÒÐÀÍÑÏÎÐÒ, ÀÐÕÈÒÅÊÒÓÐÀ
- Exposure: f/5.0, 2 ñåêóíä
- More Photo Info: view
- Âåðñèÿ: Îðèãèíàëüíàÿ âåðñèÿ
- Date Submitted: 2012-01-09 13:24