Photographer's Note
Sunday afternoon strollers on a small bridge across the mouth of one of two parallel docks beside the Yarra River in Melbourne. This area is called South Wharf. One of the docks or inlets is now occupied by the 1885 sailing ship (or 'tall ship'), the 'Polly Woodside'. A look at the map and a zoom in will show the ship sitting in the river itself while the construction work took place in and around its present home. It's docking area, during construction, seems to have been dammed and filled with concrete. Today, a pedestrian bridge crosses the entry to each of the inlets. The aerial photo must be a few years old, but watermarks showing the approximate positions of the bridges have been added to it; you can also see the supporting pylons under construction. I've positioned the red marker as well as I can to show where I took the photo, looking east along the Yarra River. A view of the river is blocked by the completed bridge, and the place where I stood to take the photo is now a pleasant bar where Santo, Klaudio, Steve, Alfred and myself enjoyed some beer during our walk three weeks ago. The reference to Lego-Land is surely self-explanatory! I think the architecture is, to be honest, uninspiring - mostly very box-like, with the exception of the slight curves of the Crown Casino on the right and the Crowne Plaza on the left - these buildings are not related! The two tallest buildings are the Rialto (left side) and the Eureka Tower (right).
By the way, when looking at the map, click on the multi-coloured 'Google' in the bottom left corner to open a much larger image.
BennyV, jlbrthnn, golus, Budapestman, macjake, tyro, Royaldevon, jhm, vasilpro, bayno, gildasjan, siolaw, SnapRJW, annjackman, kordinator, Vasa, cavli, Angshu has marked this note useful
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snunney
(130967) 2012-01-27 3:42
Hello Andrew,
You low vantage point offers the perfect point of view. I like the presence of the two ladies walking toward us and that dramatic cloud filled sky. Colours and detail are both excellent. Funny and apt title as well.
BennyV
(34710) 2012-01-27 3:55
Hello Andrew
Great low pov. I also like the sky and the way the red building stands out in the city background. Fine picture, thanks for sharing it & have a good weekend.
Benny
SNOOP_Chan
(4377) 2012-01-27 4:25
Hello Andrew, nice photo here. Very good perspective on the town. Great sky.
Regards!
jlbrthnn
(76043) 2012-01-27 4:39
Hello Andrew,
This light low-angle shot is very pleasant towards these ladies, and towards a magnificent sky. The neatness and the depth are surprising. I like the light and the colors. Good work.
Have a nice day
Cordially
Joël
LOOOK13
(19046) 2012-01-27 5:13
Salut Andrew.
Very good capture with an excellent result.
Spectacular cloudy sky, and very nice P O V.
I like very much.
Great cheer.
Sergiom
(117241) 2012-01-27 5:58
Bonjour Andrew,
J'aime bien le point de vue qui place bien haut dans l'image les passants qui déambulent sur le trottoir. L'arrière plan est attrayant et le ciel est magnifique.
Amicalement
Serge
federico
(6109) 2012-01-27 6:52
hello andrew, good shot here, very well composed with the line of bridge going from left to right and the 2 subjects capturing the view
well done
fred
Nicou
(193806) 2012-01-27 8:06
Hello
quel cile fuyant et iamge usperbe cpatage avec ce deux belle dame sur le pont et les building moderne fantastique vue et ocmpo.
Bravo et amitié
Nicou
golus
(2893) 2012-01-27 9:06
Hi Andrew,
This is a marvellous shot. Your low level POV is a highly intelligent pick and it is so vigorous to show the finest details of the extraordinary sky. A real feast for the eyes. I presume B&W would also be a fine alternative. Many thanks for sharing. Best Wishes,
Suleyman
Budapestman
(82620) 2012-01-27 9:30
Hi Andrew,
great shot the composition is fantastic I like the atmosphere of the photo and the effective POV, the colours and lights are splendid, Tfs! Have a nice weekend! Kellemes hétvégét kívánok!
György
Gigidusud
(21679) 2012-01-27 12:27
Hello Andrew,
Beautiful shot with a fantastic sky,i like it!
Best regards.
Ghislaine
ifege
(46851) 2012-01-27 12:38
G'day Andrew
A suitable title - I a agree on your comments about the architecture but the photo works well with the strollers and the great sky. The red leggo building is useful too for the splash of red.
At least you've been getting some sun down there - friends left Melbourne the other day when it was 35 and arrived her to 18 and rian, rain, rain!
cheers
Ian
macjake
(98256) 2012-01-27 12:47
Hi Andrew
interesting write up in your note.
as a lover and architecture photography and cityscapes/views, this one captures my attention immediately.
the only thing i would change about the photo is a slight movement to the right- therefore the small vertical black post would not be blocking the buildings in the bg, it would be placed beside the buildings.
but then again, i'm not there with you, so i don't know what the set is like in real life - perhaps you couldn't move over more.
For myself and others who have not been to this city, its a wonderful shot, as we see the layout and how the city presents itself. As for the construction, i guess its a personal preference thing - i really like the look of the buildings. I can see dozens of architecture abstract shots already in my head, guess its just how you view it and what inspires us individually.
the clouds offer a great backdrop, without them alot would be lost. the woman on the left, her colorful attire adds something too - and to be honest, I think the buildings look prettier than the dress! The woman on the right looks smart and casual.
all in all, a great photo, i've enjoyed picking it apart, hope you don't mind :)
Cheers
craig
SteveH
(8220) 2012-01-27 21:06
Hi Andrew, you certainly put the sky to good use in this image. CPL did its job well. Red building is a well placed eye catcher. cheers, Steve
P-S-I-G
(25536) 2012-01-28 2:43
Hello Andrew,
A very good one. I like the exposure very much. Excellent POV chosen. Good scene taken.
Best regards,
Fabrice
romanaa
(8430) 2012-01-28 6:30
Hello Andrew,
the low POV you have chosen and the shape of the bridge gives me the feeling of watching a fashion show. Absolutely perfect composition and wonderful sky.
Well done
Best wishes
Romana
tyro
(30513) 2012-01-28 8:39
Hello Andrew,
A very fine picture and beautifully composed. Interesting note too.
The strong line of the walkway is a powerful compositional feature as also are the two ladies progressing along it: it gives a sense of perspective and also carries the eye to the distant tall buildings. The bright red building at left is a strong anchor in the composition and holds the whole picture together.
Perfect exposure, stunning colours, a wonderful sky (no doubt aided by your use of a polariser) and, as always, exquisite sharpness.
Beautiful!
Kind Regards,
John.
Royaldevon
(85576) 2012-01-29 1:40
Hello Andrew,
I found studying the map really interesting, it gave me a much better understanding of the river and the location.
I love your low pov which clearly defines the ladies as the focal image, dwarfing, as they do, the buildings and linking so directly with that lovely sky.
The bridge makes a fine lead into the shot and creates a strong f/g triangle, as well as becoming a good dividing line.
In our sometimes overzealous health and safety concious world, I was surprised to notice that there were no railings at the edge of the bridge. Does that mean people have to take a little responsibility for themselves?
Have a lovely day,
Bev :-)
jhm
(211734) 2012-01-29 2:45
Hello Andrew,
You chose a very nice title for your picture, indeed the background is exactly a Lego-land.
The ladies in foreground are the real eye catchers on these picture.
Good captured place and scenery.
Soft colors and perfect sharpness and clarity.
Very well done, TFS.
Have a nice Sunday,
John.
williewhistler
(16606) 2012-01-30 4:08
Hello Andrew,
I quite like the way that the two ladies walking towards us are balanced by the couple walking away in the distance.
That is a super sky and you have taken every advantage of it.
Cheers Les.
vasilpro
(41801) 2012-01-30 11:37
Hello Andrew,
Wonderful composition with a beautiful sky, excellent low POV, lovely light and colors, very good clarity, sharpness and contrast, TfS!
Warm regards, Vasilis.
MJR
(3360) 2012-02-01 12:27
Andrew
Neat photo, all the better for being from a low view point.
I chuckled when a friend of mine ( photo club member and keen competition enterer ) , told me that A.R.P.S. judge did not mean an expert associate member of the photographic society, rather, that he would expect a red patch somewhere.
And its true, a red patch lifts a picture, in the main.
And thats true here. The red lego brick really packs a punch. That and the strong presence of the ladies in your foreground.
And what a glorious sky! I like a good sky, and this is one such. Not sure what it means weather wise, probably more sunshine !! Damn !
Rgds
Martin
bayno
(18348) 2012-02-01 15:08
Hi Andrew,
beautiful title for this post, I really like the low POV (almost underground), the scene is beautiful with these two fascinating women who walk and the background of this modern city of skyscrapers that I do not know, very nice sky and deep the red building contrasts well with the gray, I enjoyed doing a WAS I hope you do not mind,
regards, Valter
gildasjan
(43826) 2012-02-02 5:07
Bonjour Andrew
La composition est bien pensée avec ces deux femmes en mouvement devant ce paysage urbain parfaitement photographié.Un très bon rendu des couleurs et ici l'architecture rouge à gauche de la composition donne du piment à cette image.
Bonne journée
Amicalement
gildas
mauro61
(53411) 2012-02-02 15:08
ciiao Andrew,
il POV dal basso rende molto veritiero il titolo con le donne che attraversano la scena e i grandi palazzi che diventano piccoli alle loro spalle.
Buona idea ben realizzata,
saluti
maurizio
siolaw
(38294) 2012-02-02 22:31
Hi Andrew
The ground level POV gave strong dynamism to the scene and so did that lively sky.
The buildings remind of lego in true!
Greetings
Laurent
SnapRJW
(31631) 2012-02-03 22:25
Hello Andrew - There are so many pluses in this shot I am unsure where to start. Your POV is good and emphasises the strolling women very well, the rest of the shot hangs perfectly around them. What is very striking is the light and contrast, the reds leap out but don't dominate, the sky is extremely well managed, dramatic but again does not dominate. All in all a very well balanced and super work. Regarding the WS... for me this shot is far stronger. Best regards Rosemary
batalay
(41261) 2012-02-04 23:40
Hello Andrew,
The unusual vantage point helped you produce a memorable shot — a cat's eye view of the world, an inspiring sky, the brilliant red building for highlight... The note is informative and much appreciated.
Warm regards and have a restful Sunday,
Bulent
holmertz
(101880) 2012-02-07 2:20
Hello Andrew,
The low angle gives great prominence to the vertical features of high-rise buildings and people. The interestingly shaped clouds provide a good background. The red building may not be very pretty but certainly adds a splash of bright colour.
Regards,
Gert
Nard
(6972) 2012-02-08 0:20
Hi Andrew
Nice and surprisng POV, you seem to be hanging in the air to take the picture. The 2 girls walking are well placeand I like also the cloudy sky looking like a wave. Excellent light and sharpness
Regards
Bernard
annjackman
(23019) 2012-02-10 23:48
Hello Andrew.
Trying to catch up with my lost critiques so I hope that you don't mind me being brief. A really super picture. The POV and red colour make an unusual and excellent cityscape.
Regards, Ann
danyy
(0) 2012-02-11 7:40
Bonjour Andrew,
un magnifique ciel sur Melbourne, une ville qui me parait bien moderne et accueillante.
Je trouve le cadrage parfait et des points d'intérêt partout sur la photo.
Amicalement.
Daniel.
jimkil
(1706) 2012-02-11 23:25
Hell Andrew
I must get over to Melbourne soon, I would not mind living here for a year also, Oz has some great cities IMO. You have conveyed the building as small very well against he human element. The red building is eye-catching as is the stunning cloud formations. I personally would prefer the other lady not looking at the lens but what can you do ;-)
Well done
Jim
kordinator
(8738) 2012-02-12 17:49
Hello Andrew
This light low point of view.
Pretty ladies in the foreground and towards a magnificent sky.
Amazing colored architecture all around.
Excellent composition.
Best regards
Saša
jadesgran
(5433) 2012-02-17 5:20
Hi Andrew
When Les and I were in Melbourne we had a tour of the `Polly Woodside`. We found it fasinating.
Also had a meal in the Crown Casino.
Your indepth note brought back many happy memories. T.F.S.
Best Wishes
Gladys.
npecanhuk
(79329) 2012-02-18 17:23
Hello Andrew!
Very nice and interesting urban photograph!
I really enjoyed the chosen pov, composition, colors and exposure: highlights here, in my humble opinion!
I love that sky! The presence of the two women was quite welcome for the success of this image! That sky is wonderful!
TFS - congrats,
Cheers,
Neyvan
Waylim
(25436) 2012-02-18 17:39
Hi Andrew,
Very nice shot here. I really like the low POV, you are actually lower than the ladies walking on the wharf which is kind of a unique perspective. It feels like I'm a little bird or animal on the ground, looking up at the big world, which make it special and I like that. The dramatic sky with beautiful and interesting shape cloud is really a nice bonus.
The only minor nit picking/or just simply my preference is: the red of the building is over power the rest of image. It is the only major warm color, and it draws way to much attention to it, while the rest of the image is fairly soft and subdue in more neutral colors, more natural and soothing to the eye. I would almost wanted to desaturate the red to balance it better with the rest of the image. Which lead me to critique the WS. What is the purpose in that? I know it is a neat visual effect, but on this image, it is so not appropriate, especially when the building is completely off to the side and the main part of the composition. I think it is already kind of distracting to begin with. I guess that is a matter of preferences :) which we are entitled.
Way
daddo
(28748) 2012-02-19 4:43
Hi Andrew.Dynamic shot in which the people and the clouds, plus the water below are in motion which the POV seems to accentuate. Great exposure and composition. The tiered effect works well and places us in privileged spot. Wonderful light on people and the Lego bits. Regards. Klaudio.
Vasa
(515) 2012-02-24 3:09
Hello Andrew,
Belle idee et tres belle realisation, my friend. Maybe, you are late two steps of ladies to have them on the right part of picture. Because all concentration is on two girls. Superb atmosphere. Two points for Melbourne. Warm regards, and thank you for your note.
Branko
skippy007
(12510) 2012-02-27 19:58
Hello Andrew, I remember the reference to Leggo Land, it certainly lacks that old "European" look. Nice perspective from your well chosen low POV, I don't think it would have worked without the inclusion of the ladies walking towards the camera, the sky also adds interest & drama. Nice capture with good colour & clarity. Again thanks for the day.
Regards
Santo
PS Looked at the map, hardly recognised it.
claudeD
(47754) 2012-03-03 7:34
Hello Andrew,
very fine picture with a good composition and from a well choosen low pov.I like your title very much.Very well done.TFS.
With regards from Luxembourg
JC
cavli
(1876) 2012-03-20 5:00
Hello Andrew,
marvelous colors, contrast and sharpness. nice pov and dof. your comopsition is quite nice. I like the sky very much. It looks great!
tfs
regards..
Angshu
(56760) 2012-05-10 22:09
Hello Andrew
Nice scene from the wharf...the red building in the BG is an eye catcher. The clouds help create a dramatic sky in the otherwise quite staidt BG. The two ladies walking past across the diagonal of the bridge is of course the pivot of this composition
Best Regards
Angshu
Hansaphotos
(11381) 2012-07-08 6:29
Hello Andrew
A wonderful urban scene, very well captured with the red building as a real eye-catcher. A very nice sky that has a great visual impact on the scene. Great work:) TFS. Enjoy your Sunday.
Best regards, Erling
adidas5nb
(5743) 2012-10-30 20:11
really like the atmosphere in the pic. great light management.what really attracts the eye is the red in the left bottom 2/3...as always.
regards
DWAIPAYAN
Photo Information
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Copyright: Andrew McRae (macondo)
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- Genre: ÌÅÑÒÀ
- Medium: ÖÂÅÒÍÎÉ
- Date Taken: 2012-01-08
- Categories: ÅÆÅÄÍÅÂÍÎÅ, ÀÐÕÈÒÅÊÒÓÐÀ
- Camera: Pentax K5, Tamron 18-250mm f/3.5-6.3 DiII, Cokin 62mm Circular Polarizer
- Exposure: f/4.5, 1/500 ñåêóíä
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- Date Submitted: 2012-01-27 2:56
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