Through Four Windows, a photo from Tel Aviv, Tel Aviv

Photographer's Note

Yes, there are four windows on the way to the sea here... Luckily all of them were fully opened, with no interference, as they were actually building, or renovating, this building...

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sevy (58) 2009-03-26 0:43

Hello Daniel,

You found here a very good point of view with the following windows, driving the look to the man in the sun and to the sea.
Moreover, you managed well the exposutre to get a good rendering both in light and shadows.

Yves.

leo61 (0) 2009-03-26 0:50

Hi Daniel!
This reminds me to the work of M.C. Escher.
Great POV and perfect timing to catch this man in the
window(s).
Regards,leo

holmertz (103762) 2009-03-26 1:04

Hello Daniel,
A good observation. You have managed a fine and interesting composition made possible by sthe architecture and some luck. The glimpse of the sea and the people give an extra dimension to the view.
Best regards,
Gert

delnaja (2056) 2009-03-26 1:23

good use of the place to create an original framing Daniel. I like this point of blue at the end of the perspective. Well seen.
Best wishes
Fred

mikolaj_kawa (0) 2009-03-26 1:50

Hello Daniel! Very interesting POV, original composition. Ideal sharpness. Good colours. Very good job. Well done!

dta (98848) 2009-03-26 2:42

Hello Daniel ,
Very well seen ! You've chosen the best POV for that . Nice sharpness and light on all the grounds . The presence of the people is a good bonus to the picture .
Bravo

brevbrev14 (140) 2009-03-26 3:36

Hi daniel
interesting game of windows here, like a frame in a frame in a frame...at the end the subjects..
very good compo
ciao
Valeria

chook (4) 2009-03-26 3:50

Good perspective and DOF. Welll done.

KLB (23723) 2009-03-26 3:54

Hello Daniel

Excellent point of view to use all the windows as a frame.
You've thought ideally your composition and you've done a great use of each windowsill to lead the eye to the man.
Excellent light management too, each element is well exposed so that we can appreciate many sharp details.
A very good observation.

Regards
Karine

charlotte_iona (1111) 2009-03-26 4:00

Beautiful use of framing, great work! just to be picky, I'd probably have a go at cloning out the bag of building materials (or whatever) just inside the near window.

BlueRaven (37) 2009-03-26 4:00

Hi Daniel,

Well seen, perfectly captured. Superb POV and light management. The person in the shot adds some dynamism.
My only regret is that your note doesn't mention anything about the location where this shot was taken. I'd love to have learned more about this interesting building.

Best wishes
Claudia

Morac (27725) 2009-03-26 5:33

Hello Daniel,
It is a very good point of view with the following windows and interesting composition.
The effect of depth and perspective is very well made.
Amicalement
Marc

saxo042 (38078) 2009-03-26 10:46

Hi Daniel,
A very good zig-zag pattern of the windowsills, leading uo to the persons a the glimpse of water behind. A very attractive composition and a very good observation!
Kind regards
Gunnar

delkoo (68) 2009-03-27 0:36

hi daniel,

The shapes and character passing by are quite appealing, the frame is flawless as you have captured everything in the proper way.

pest regards

didier

Sne011 (3084) 2009-03-27 3:54

Hello Daniel
Beautiful shot, interesting perspective. Well spotted!
Have a nice weekend
Sneza

ktanska (45126) 2009-03-31 6:00

Hi Daniel,
Perfect location to look through all those window openings. Man and sea make a good subject at the focal point. Glimpses of details inside wake up curiosity too.
Kari

gilad33 (14433) 2009-04-11 5:47

Superb point of view. Well done

Isabelle (9046) 2009-05-08 13:55

this one i like very much. there is only one place in Sгo Paulo (a public place - as far as I know) we have these windows... the Pinacoteca. Iґll give a try one of these days, and try to emulate your work. In fact, your gallery is very inspiring. Youґre one of the brave ones who still try something different.