Betonska ograda, a photo from Serbia, North

Photographer's Note

Betonska ograda.

Dvoriste, je ogradjeno betonskom ogradom.
Lepo vreme otopilo je prvi sneg.
Napolju pada kisa, hladno je.
Usamljeno drvo ponosito stoji i broji dane.
Uskoro ce doci Nova godina.

Concrete fence.

Yard, is surrounded by a concrete barrier.
Nice weather melted the snow first.
It's raining outside, it's cold.
Lonely tree standing proudly and counting the days.
Soon will come the New Year.

Vasa, jhm, ourania, ikeharel, s_lush, kato, mcmtanyel has marked this note useful

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holmertz (102650) 2012-12-28 11:44

Hello Pavle,
I wouldn't say that this concrete barrier would be a pretty sight to have outside my window, but in this composition you make it look quite nice. You use it well for a composition on three levels, the lowest covered with patches of snow, the second crowned by yellow grass on which we see the lovely tree that along with the sky makes the third level. It's a very sharp picture with good light.
Kind regards,
Gert

Vasa (515) 2012-12-28 13:55

Pozdrav Pajo,

imaљ pravo da te sve inspiriљe, pa i betonska ograda. Ja trzam na ćeramidu ili na biber-crep. Kad idem kroz neko selo, ja samo to izaberem. Volim љto svemu pristupaљ poetično. Puno pozdrava,

Branko

siolaw (38294) 2012-12-28 21:30

Hi Pavle
You managed a decent compo out of an ordinary view. The walls layers work well leading the eye to the lone tree...
Greetings and a happy 2013 to you!
Laurent

abmdsudi (95869) 2012-12-28 21:49

Hi Pavle
Another good daily life capture, a quaint shot and a slice of life, with the solitary tree in the background.illustrating day to day situation of this place and the foreground details with a more definite flow of the eye through the picture and elements work smoothly. The pale blue sky adds the atmosphere. A fine record shot, Well done.
Kind regards

Sonata11 (34119) 2012-12-28 22:27

Hello Pavle,
very interesting composition and vertical framing of this place. I wish You and Your Family Happy, Healthy New Year 2013,
Barbara.

tedesse (25147) 2012-12-28 23:35

Hello Pavle!
Good point of view that shows the concrete fence.
Nice frame and the composition of a single tree in the background.
Happy New Year 2013!
Tadeusz

fabbs99 (17179) 2012-12-29 0:40

Hello Paja,

You have produced a really striking image here. The composition is well chosen, with excellent combination of light and shadows and great sharpness.. Very good sharpness, and excellent color and light management.TFS.

Wish You Happy New Year,
Farhat

jhm (211736) 2012-12-29 1:24

Hello Paja,

A very well image with the solitary tree in background.
Also a nice image of the foreground, but without snow, perhaps against new year comes the snow!
Excellent composition, perfect captured. TFS.

A health 2013,
John.

saxo042 (38078) 2012-12-29 7:09

Hi Pavle,
An interesting configuration of geometrical patterns here, there are indeed many rectangles on top of each other here. Then the very strict lines are broken with a single tree in a very pleasant way. A very artistic composition with these items.
Happy New Year!
Gunnar

ourania (51103) 2012-12-29 8:05

Hello Paja,
it's great that you can find beauty and interest anywhere and make lovely compositions out of your finds. I like very much the rhythm and depth of this vertical frame. There's great contrast between the concrete lower part of the frame and the subtlety of the upper one. Sharpness, lighting and colours are wonderful. The moodiness of light and colours is very consistent and appealing. Congratulations and thank you!
All the best, have a lovely evening,
Ourania

elenimavrandoni (0) 2012-12-29 12:23

Hello Pavle, the lonely tree still standing despite the weather, the storm, the wind, the snow!
Happy New Year to you, keep on taking beautiful pictures of Serbian scenery and daily life!
Best wishes,
Eleni

aliabazari (22127) 2012-12-29 18:53

Здраво Паја је
Авесоме схот, ја га волим. Јасно види. Излагање и боја су веома добри. Тако лепа.

Поздрав ...

UlfE (14641) 2012-12-29 23:16

Hi Pavle,

A great composition where you make excellent use of the repeated forms. The inclusion of the tree and the vertical format is a perfect choice. TFS and Happy New Year!

Ulf

jmdias (115100) 2012-12-30 1:12

paja

nice vertical compo with a view of the strips of concrete and the nude tree in the upper side. nice job.
happy 2013

jorge

Schnappilic (9692) 2012-12-30 2:53

Hello Pavle,

Beautiful framing with lonely tree waiting for the new year.

Happy new year!

Ovidiu

mesutilgim (0) 2012-12-30 12:04

Hello Pavle,
Nice capture with wintery ligth and good chosen format which fits well to the scenery.
An entry with perfect message; the figth of the nature with urbanism.
The lonesome tree at back looks like a warning finger !
TFS and all the best for 2013.
Best regards from İstanbul
MESUT ILGIM

karacabeylis (1471) 2012-12-30 12:43

nice composition and nicely natural colors. happy new year !

adramad (72970) 2012-12-30 17:16

Hello Pavle.
Very nice and original vertical composition, which allows us to see different horizontal sections of terrain heights, contenidad by these walls, ideal contrast that lonely tree with nice graphics on the gray sky.
Well done.
I wish you all the best for you and family in the New Year 2013.
Warm regards.
Luis.

chrisvek (7003) 2012-12-30 19:47

Hello dear Pavle

Hm.I supposed that this is the period after the "snowstorm".Very wonderful composition and so nice POV.Great depth with soft colors and nice atmosphere.So relaxing.Very good job!I wish all the best for 2013 with health and peace for you and your family.

Have a great New Year's eve
Chris

danos (110407) 2012-12-31 0:16

Good morning Paja,
nice to see that this year there are not snows as the most of them were melted.Good this Wintry scenery.

I wish,to you and your family a wonderful, peaceful and prosperous New Year,Danos

ikeharel (113291) 2013-01-01 1:21

Good morning Pavle,
First, I think a horizontal format would be more useful here, show more of the surrounding. Clarity and colors are OK, but - the texture of the concrete fence not offering much of a remarkable view. You chosen well the naked tree as a fine addition to the image.
Greetings,
Ike

s_lush (16602) 2013-01-02 3:19

Hello Pavle,
A very interesting and highly aesthetic composition. The tree at the top is the main compositional element, although the foreground is very attractive too. Perfectly well done!
Best regards,
Sergiy

mxblau (225) 2013-01-11 18:27 [Comment]

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fabianoleite (13575) 2013-01-22 4:58

Interesting view with the two layers of walls and the tree on the background. Creative composition, good work!

cpontoal (254) 2013-01-27 8:25

Interessante enquadramento. Foto com um olhar diferente sobre as coisas. Parabйns.

jabber (323) 2013-05-17 10:14

very good composition.you make different layers in your shot with choose vertically view.

radegaja (60) 2013-05-29 13:10

Dobro vece.
Zanimljiva tema, lepa kompozicija i dobra ostrina.
Sve najbolje vam zelim.
Rade..

Urs (14082) 2013-06-06 21:24

Hi Pavle

When I was kid, at new years eve all around me would be covered by snow, but today, thanks to global warming, we can have snow anytime but not when we would like to have it. Warm regards

Urs

kato (11630) 2013-07-19 20:33

Hello Pavle,

You're capturing well this scene by good composition and excellent tone/clarity, so it's interesting and impressive to see winter scene with the snow and tree of no leaf. It's tasteful for yellow and green plant in front of concrete barrier.

Kind regards,
mikio

Miguel82 (47110) 2014-11-17 11:31

Dobro vece Pavle,
interesting text, that concrete barrier is used to break the slope and help the plants growing
Prijatno vece i mirna noc, sve najbolje

mcmtanyel (68447) 2015-09-09 20:27

Hello Paja,
I like the layered composition in this photo.
Regards,
MT