Photographer's Note
Somewhere in Iași, a large city in north-eastern Romania near the border with Moldova, I saw this street crossing. There may have been some work going on, but I didn't see any persons busy here. Maybe it was their lunch hour.
The original photo, showing a wider and deeper view, also included cars, but I cropped it into this more minimalistic composition. I liked the combination of white lines and colourful short poles.
You can see the original in the WS.
With this photo I end my series of minimalism. I feel a need to go back to "normal" photos.
Fis2, jean113, pajaran, pierrefonds, ikeharel, aliabazari, mcmtanyel, COSTANTINO, adramad, ChrisJ has marked this note useful
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Fis2
(170747) 2022-03-16 2:03
Witaj Gert my neighbour today:)!
Interesting photos from street.
Good frames, composition and colors.
Well done.
Good morning.
Krzysztof
jean113
(27853) 2022-03-16 2:05
Hello Gert, the editing of your main shot works exceptionally well for this, the last of your minimalist series.
The vertical, colourful posts in strong contrast with the horizontal white painted lines on the road.
No distractions, an abstract work from the street furniture, excellent presentation.
Maybe you will return to this series in the future? I hope so as you have a good eye for it.
Kind regards, Jean.
pajaran
(115891) 2022-03-16 2:12
Pozdrav.
Interesantan pogled, dobar tekst ...
Uvek neke oznake na putu, dobro pokazano sa lepim bojama, kontratsom i perspektivom.
Dobar rad sa lepom fotografijom u radionci.
Problemi u saobracaju sa mnogo oznaka i prepreka.
Zelim vam lep dan, sve najbolje.
Paja
Silvio1953
(221593) 2022-03-16 5:04
Ciao Gert, lovely and original minimalist composition, great perspective, beautiful graphic, fine details, wonderful colors, splendid light and excellent clarity, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio
pierrefonds
(114448) 2022-03-16 6:12
Hi Gert,
The lines on the street and the posts have a graphical effect. The point of view is showing the details of of the posts. The light is giving good colors output. Have a nice day.
Pierre
ikeharel
(113345) 2022-03-16 7:01
Frankly, Gert,
The wider scope on the WS has a better sight of the intersection, the crpopped version has the nature of being minimalistic, which was on your preferences.
anyway, a nice taken at this spot in town.
Good afternoon,
Ike
jmdias
(115156) 2022-03-16 9:10
gert
it is a marvelous minimalist compo, I liked the contrast of the B&W against the colors of the poles and, at same time, the graphic aspect of the lines in the ground. very beautiful.
take care
jorge
aliabazari
(22175) 2022-03-16 9:30
Hello Gert
Well done with lines. I believe that cropping in some images can lead to a better concept, which is why I like the photo you shared. Thanks
Tue
(92360) 2022-03-16 11:05
Hej Gert,
Man skulle måske forvente at de der små stolper skulle være i de rumæske farver med rødt, gult og blåt, men her ser du også meget farverigt ud med den grå vej og de hvide striber. Godt set og fanget.
Lars
lousat
(139266) 2022-03-16 12:23
Hi Gert,minimal but with a lot of white stripes and colors too, another very nice and different example of this theme in your collection,useful large view in the WS, well done from Romania. Have a nice evening and thanks,Luciano
mcmtanyel
(68503) 2022-03-16 20:31
Hello Gert,
I agree, the cropped one is more aesthetically pleasing than the original.
Regards,
MT
ifege
(48085) 2022-03-16 21:29
Hi Gert
A good crop to create the minimalist photo.
Another good one.
cheers
Ian
COSTANTINO
(116490) 2022-03-16 22:51
Hello dear Gert and have a nice day
and a happy evening
the beauty is into the simplicity
I like this idea of presentation
regards
cOSTANTINO
jemaflor
(147128) 2022-03-17 0:36
Hi Gert,
Well observed and framed, good effect with this graphics and these colors, photogenic details, tfs.
Royaldevon
(85932) 2022-03-17 3:55
Hello Gert,
It has been an enjoyable series and pleasing to concentrate on small patterns within a wider context.
Your crop, from the big picture, has been very effective, concentrating our attention on the trio of bollards and their connections of white stripes.
I think you have enjoyed the challenge, too, and will return to this theme!
Have a good day,
Bev :-)
emka
(158156) 2022-03-17 13:44
Hello Gert, From your minimalistic composition I like this one the most because of these saturated colours and interesting white stripes. Wisely cropped.
Best regards Malgo
adramad
(72978) 2022-03-19 10:24
Hi Gert.
A curious minimalist composition, where the white stripes contrast with the colorful signposts, it seems that they warned of the street in poor condition judging by the wider view of the WS.
An effective color, along with a good management of lighting and sharpness.
Well done. I like.
Enjoy the weekend.
My best wishes for you.
Luis
ChrisJ
(171822) 2022-03-21 2:23
Hej Gert
The colours of Germany or Belgium! Excellent sharpness and graphism. Good depth and perspective with the layered composition. Iasi is one of only a few Romanian towns I haven't visited. Tfs!
kasianowak
(17676) 2022-04-06 23:28
Hi Gert
I enjoyed your minimalist series! But I understand it can't go on forever. Just like any other journey.
Comparing the main image with the uncropped WS I think you chose probably the best possible crop. It was a good idea to keep exactly 3 poles in the frame - I like the way they form a triangle. The lines fill the remaining space nicely.
Best wishes
Kasia
Photo Information
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Copyright: Gert Holmertz (holmertz)
(102700)
- Genre: ÌÅÑÒÀ
- Medium: ÖÂÅÒÍÎÉ
- Date Taken: 2011-09-00
- Âåðñèÿ: Îðèãèíàëüíàÿ âåðñèÿ, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2022-03-16 1:23
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