pediatrics III, a photo from Sachsen, East

Photographer's Note

And with this one I finish this Pediatrics series, with four pictures total.

A funny, colourful building adding a lot to the surroundings. For more details check this one.

Probably this picture doesnґt add much to what I have already shown but I really like the red blobs in this one.
The window is a bit distorted as the wall is not straight but convex in this case, opposing this other shot where it is concave.

And that's it

SophieL, elihesamian, agelaste, michel_r, supereira, aznegrao has marked this note useful

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Ebbe (9625) 2004-11-19 16:35

Strong colors and a fine corner position of the interesting parts. You could adjust the perspective a bit more to get the window parallell to the frame.

The bag hidden behind the shades gives a bad taste of terrorist threat....

avigur_11 (22553) 2004-11-19 16:43

I like this series. Anton. Very bo;d and contrastic colors and a very effective frame. The position of the window is well chosen. Well done.

Cool-ice (5289) 2004-11-19 17:57

Nice graphism...and I like the detail of the bag !
I just discovered your portfolio and congratulations, you have interesting things in it, with an impressive variety as well in color than in B&W.

Kenny10pin (19301) 2004-11-19 17:59

very nice graphics here, well seen and taken, I like the patterns and the cropping too, well done

aphex123 (111) 2004-11-19 18:45

I like the use of the black background to frame the picture. The colours and composition are great (curves and lines!). That window is very interesting with its bag, and what look like leaf stickers.

Midnight_sun (1941) 2004-11-20 8:06

A very bold composition which works perfectly in this big frame. The contrasting colours and the contrasting shapes of the window and pattern re-inforce the two tone nature of this shot. You've done well in your choice of composition, great stuff.

Isaperez (355) 2004-11-20 9:22

Wonderful!This is a strong image,I love the colors and framing.:)

SophieL (6042) 2004-11-20 10:13

Fine conclusion to a fine series. I like the very graphical approach, straight lines and bright colors, with a little touch of human presence in all of them. The strong black frame goes well with the graphical aspect. Nice job alltogether!

elihesamian (26149) 2004-11-20 15:03

O!
very graphical,beautiful,with a special composition,hard for critique:)
Congratulation,very well seen,Anton.
I like it,Great playing with colors and forms you had,thanks for posting.

agelaste (533) 2004-11-21 12:34

so schoen mit den Curves hier,Anton!
again be surprised by the rich and fresh colors there in Dresden,nice architexture shoot of the details,well-done
xu

apazevedo (5469) 2004-11-25 18:30

Good work, Anton. In fact this picture is powerful with its strong colours, shapes and contrasts; a very interesting composition, well done!

michel_r (1118) 2004-12-03 20:40

A very nice graphism. The bag adds a lively note. In fact you have many nice pictures in your portfolio.

Homerhomer (4080) 2004-12-04 23:27

This picture may not add much but I am glad you posted it, the play of colours and the play of square window with circles is spectacular. Next time you take a shot like this just go inside and tell those poeple to remove the bag from the window;-)
I think I would also prefer corrected perspective, so the bottom and side of the window are aligned with the edges of the image.
In this case the frame IMO is overpowering.
Peter

capa (743) 2004-12-06 18:06

Excelente grafismo.Alias toda a serie esta muito boa , parabens. 5*

supereira (9576) 2004-12-10 5:33

Great details.Very good colors and good contrast between them.I like the point of view and the prespective.Good textures,light and sharpness.Well done!

Mrg (825) 2004-12-18 9:06

I really like this strange grafical images. Such strong colors.Well done

aznegrao (10316) 2005-01-15 18:09

Gosto muito de composiзхes simples e fortes simplesmente pela sensibilidade do fotografo, aqui temos um belo exemplo. Amo essa saturaзгo.
Greetings Anton.
aznegrao.

borax (1732) 2005-01-20 14:57

I just hope you pediatric serie is not too long... that's too bad 'cause I really like your other shots.

Porteplume (4036) 2005-01-22 7:20

Attractive too... Smooth image, strong effect. I must say that the black frame around it is especially well thought.

* Is it possible you made a mistake on spelling the titles of III & IV?

RandomCameraGuy (3071) 2005-01-28 20:52

Fantastic presentation Anton. It's difficult to pull off such a thick border, but this time it actually works to highlight your funky shot--or should I say "groovy man, groovy..." ;-)

SampraS (619) 2006-03-29 9:54

I like this one!
It's soo cool!
cheers
Adam