When no one is there 4 U, a photo from Balochistan, West

Photographer's Note

When no one is there for you and you think no one cares, When the whole world walkes out on you and you think you are alone I will be there,When the one you care about the most could be careless about you, When the one you gave your heart to throws it on your face i will be there, When the person you trusted betrays you, when the person you share all your memories with hurts you,I will be there , When all you need is a friend to listen to you, When all you need is someone to catch your tears I will be there, When your heart beats so bad you canat even breath, When you just want to curl up and die I will be there, So you see I will be there unitl the end this is a Promise I can make, If you ever need me just remember me from your heart and I will be there...
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Hello all friends, I am back..and UPLOADING NEW PICTURE after 2006-07-31..(after 7 months i guess)

adores, gelor, pranab, calimex, jarais, neosprint, Luciana, mvdisco, patdeph, Atousa, Roelena, janink, Benedict has marked this note useful

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adores (46979) 2007-04-03 20:44

Hi Mujtaba!
You captured a great expression, very well framed.I'm not sure if it could work better cropping the top (with the sky) but I like it!
Regards, Anabela

nmess (2301) 2007-04-03 22:37

Great candid of the kid looking through the window. His face is a bit dark, perhaps a bit of fill flash would work well here Mujtaba. But still a delightful sight.

pranab (5354) 2007-04-06 2:27

mujtab,
you are back:) and what a big bang!
excellent framing and excellent use of light. great expressive portrait. see, this is what i was talking about. life is not that bad after all, right?

BrianGraney (1740) 2007-04-06 4:53

Hi Mujtaba,
Nice to see you posting again, and what a simple, cheerful portrait for a new beginning!
I like the direct honest smile - and agree with the suggestion to crop the sky....

Look forward to more from you.
Cheers
Brian

calimex (151) 2007-04-07 23:03

Dear Mujtaba,

It's wonderful to read your note and see this beautiful photograph. Such a rich feeling that I get from both. Your note tells me that you have been through a dark night and are seeing daylight. The photograph also provides a comfort, seeing the beautiful smile on this child who has probably not had it easy in his life, it's all very moving.

Thank you for sharing this, my friend -- and thank you for coming back, and for reminding us all of the power of love.

Josй

Flavia (10352) 2007-04-09 17:44

Hi Mujtaba,

Welcome back. Cute kid, his experssion and smile is nice and natural. The ideia of framing him using the window is nice, but the light does not help, it,s a chalenge to photograph in such conditions. You had a harsh light outiside and a low light inside, which resuted in some blurred areas on his hair for exeample and others of shadow that unfortunately kind of hide the boys nice face. Maybe a fill in flash could have helped here. I tried a WS, but reducing the shadows are very complicated. I proposed a B&W version once B&W usually works better with high contrast, such as this. I hope you like it.

Regards,

Flavia

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jarais (421) 2007-04-09 18:40

Hi Mujtaba,

Itґs a fantastic shot. His eyes transmit me a lot. Very nice note.
I give you my welcome for coming back again.

Best wishes,

Cristina.

neosprint (213) 2007-04-11 11:46

Hi Mujtaba!
Photo is wonderful.. and your note makes it more feelable.. by emotional people (like me) it can cause tears.. or some condition near them..
This photo is alive it breathes.. It can start laughting at any time.. and also crying..

Tfs
love,
Sofia

p.s. I just though the face is to dark and tried a workshop.. but my today's workshop limit is over.. so i'll post it tomorrow.. cheers.. ;)

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Burberry1 (6041) 2007-04-22 10:34

Very nice, impressive portrait of this little boy:))))
Great, trustful expression and nice cropping but maybe I would crop the white top a bit.

Greetings, Agnieszka

Luciana (2269) 2007-04-24 20:13

Olб amigo,

Gosto imensamente desta sua foto.
A luz ficou linda e o menino com um sorriso encantador.

Parabйns!!

Abraзo,
Luciana Serra.

mvdisco (17798) 2007-04-24 21:06

Bonsoir Mujtaba,
Beautiful portrait of the young kid, he has a good expression, nice picture at 'contre-Jour' (sun on back)nice colours and good point of view..Very well Done
Michel

patdeph (35750) 2007-04-27 10:18

hello Mutjaba
first,a very nice note.
Concerning the photo,the little boy expression is really lovely.Nice idea to have photograph him trough the hole.Thanks for sharing and congratulations.
Pascale

grattounet (0) 2007-05-02 6:10

Bonjour ;)
Excellente photo, les couleurs sont bien rendues, dommage pour le cramage en haut du ciel, le cadrage et trиs bon j'aurais peut-кtre enlever le bout de cadre а gauche ...
Amitiй Alain

Atousa (7131) 2007-05-13 2:24

Salam Mujtaba,
I see his face in a big U and his expression is both lovely n friendly. I liked you had cropped a bit from the top.
Interesting note too ,whose poem is it?
Regards,
Atousa

La_ (444) 2007-05-13 12:03

Merhaba,
Fotograflarinizi izledim. Ozellikle bu beni cok etkiledi. Duygulu bir calisma. tebrik ediyorum.
Sevgilerimle...

Roelena (155) 2007-05-13 13:14

Yes, you are right...title matched perfectly! But...I see a very lively light in his eyes...He is just enchanted of your attention for him, maybe a little fear of unknown and a little curiosity for your cam! You made him happy by taking this picture!
Best regards,
Elena

she (121) 2007-05-15 14:29

Hi Mujtaba
I like this picture the boy has a nice smile. I would crop the sky and a little at the left hand side.
Cheer Sheila

zig (2456) 2007-05-19 12:40

Hi Mujtaba. This is such a beautiful capture of the boy. And I love your note as well. I don't know he was alone and looking for a friend to play with, but I like how he looked at you, as if he wanted to talk to you, to listen to your story, to say something good to himm, etc. I like the intimacy between you and him.

janink (1010) 2007-05-19 14:53

Wauw Mujtaba, surfing in your portfolio I saw this picture. It is really a beauty! The curious boy, the great light, details and colourtone and your message that makes you think.
Thanks, Ingrid

Benedict (7076) 2007-07-19 22:28

hi mujtaba,
the notes remind me of the song that goes.."tomorrow morning if you wake up and the sun does not appear, i will be here; if in the dark we lose sight of love, hold my hand and have no fear 'coz i will be here".....
a fitting note to give a down-to-earth emphasis of the meaning of this foto that inspite of the hardship, he loses no hope, he enjoys living- evidenced by his smile and amiable facial expression!
the lighting is well managed, the soft colors, eye-pleasing!
benedict

mim_i (392) 2007-10-10 2:32

Very nice portrait :) Cute boy and composition!
TFS,
Mimi