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Photographer's Note
Simplicity in the Javanese life.
They carry fire-wood to their home, by walking for several kilometers as their routine activities. But some of them carry it into the market too.
[location: Dlingo, Bantul]
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CLODO
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(45116) 2010-07-15 9:12
hello Sulistyo
Good framing for the 2 women (false title!) and agreable forest hues, but the blurred foreground is too present. I propose you a WS to show you a "Javanese woman" - only one!
Cheers
CLODO
rbellemare
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(2109) 2010-07-15 9:16
Bonjour,
J'aime bien cette photo de ces femmes. Toutefois, j'ai une petite réserve sur la présence du sol en bas d'image qui à mon avis apporte peu à cette prise de vue.
weetrees
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(159) 2010-07-15 9:19
I too found the forground to be a distraction taking away from a well framed image but i suppose it has in part having to stay put to explain the womans lack of legs
do you have one maybe slightly after this one on your computer that would see the "women" a bit closer
Good concept and candid shot none the less
the w/s By Clodo is a fairer representation though i would still like to see others if you have them just in case the mother image is there and overlooked :)
Regards
JOhn
Ps gave you a full smile as i liked the idea it just needs some tweaking
dta
(98848) 2010-07-15 9:24
Hello Sullysto ,
This is a great capture of a hard daily life . The blurred FG is a little distracting , but how to avoid it , may be with a larger DOF ? The BG is really splendid .
Regards
KateinDenmark
(1634) 2010-07-15 10:55
I like this composition with its interesting POV. This woman looks old enough to be a grandmother, and yet she is carrying more than I probably could. This really says a lot about their lifestyle. Very nice post.
Greetings
Kate
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riclopes
(35577) 2010-07-19 1:21
Olá Sulis, superb daily life capture. Love this angle as if you were lying on the ground. Impressive tough work, excellent the way the woman at right is facing you, in fact the whole background is great.
warm regards,
ric
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(76) 2010-08-25 15:51
Hello Sulistyo
A well-balanced picture featuring those two hearty women working like do ants, bringing thier found treasures towards the nest.
A touching scenery.
Cheers.
Robert
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Copyright: Sulistyo Anggoro (sta)
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(170) - Genre: ËÞÄÈ
- Medium: ÖÂÅÒÍÎÉ
- Date Taken: 2010-07-11
- Categories: ÅÆÅÄÍÅÂÍÎÅ
- Camera: Canon EOS Kiss Digital X, Canon EF 75-300 mm f/4-5.6 III USM, Hoya UV Filter
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 ñåêóíä
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- Âåðñèÿ: Îðèãèíàëüíàÿ âåðñèÿ, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2010-07-15 8:58
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