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tsti003 (285) 2007-09-16 19:19

Hi benny herlambang

I really like what you have attempted to do here, and of course its the "eyes" that make this picture so interesting. And you have framed it so cleaverly with those branches, which you have then left out-of-focus so that they don't compete with your main subject.

But I think that your point of interest could be a little sharper, it tends to blend a little too well with the surroundings. The eyes could also be a little brighter too, just to give your scene a little more contrast. I have done a workshop for you, and you can judge for yourself, which is the better image.

This is just my opinion of course, and there will be many who will disagree with me and that is their prerogative. But for all that, it is still a good photograph.

However I'm not very impressed with your critique record. This will be the 59th critique TE Members have written on your work and you have only have only manged to write 1. That's not what TreakEarth is all about, we are expected to be supportive of one another and give constructive feedback and comments on each others work.

TS