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Irina75
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Bruno40 2007-09-03 7:07
Hola Irina,
The subject of this portrait is excellent, with a lot of character. However, if my eyesight doesn’t fool me, I think the focus is on the earrings instead of the eyes (something I learnt here in TE: the eyes must always be on focus, sharp).
You are a good photographer, so I can't leave the two smiles just so easily. Sorry for the not so positive critique today.
cheers
Jorge
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09-04-2007, 03:38 AM
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To Bruno40: focus
Hi Bruno,
Thanks for you comment and visit, please don't be sorry, i really appreciate you objective note rather then some points just for points. And you are absolutely right about the focus.... I cropped this photo from a much larger version (I took this lady at almost 3/4 of her body, originally it was not suppose to be a portrait, but i like the expression on the face), so I gave it a try... and the focus .... not on the eyes, it's totally true. thanks again, keep on being objective!!! Kind regards, Irina 
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